2nd Timed writing

Saeed Alrayaisah
Nov 25, 2009
W400B




The falcon


Have you ever heard about a sniper that never misses his target? Actually, there is. A huge kind of birds with sever spikes and strong vision is called ‘The falcon’. Falcons are tremendous creatures that have extreme power like as engines. Falcons live in caves in ridges of the mountains which are similar to thrones. In hunting time, they soar in the colossal sky by flipping their giant wings, which look like the plane wings, in order to find a victim that is ready to be hunted. They never miss victims because of their properties that no birds or even animals have except falcons. However, they might be frighten objects for one who is looking at them while they are soaring. The falcon represents force, solid, brave and all noble traits; therefore, the falcon was selected as a logo for my country. There is a common proverb in my country about falcons: “ If you do not know the falcon well, you might roast it”.

descriptive paragraph ( final draft)

Saeed Alrayaisah
Nov 17, 2009
W400B



My Neighborhood


I grew up in a fantasy neighborhood. The capacious neighborhood shows how the colossal terrain entertains the kids when they play on it. The breeze spreads among residents just like a relaxing symphony, and that is a fertile thing to make you feel comfortable. The alley between the houses is such as an exciting maze where you can't get bored easily. The hills look like lands from haven surrounded by beautiful flowers and plants. Up there in the sky, romantic sunset has taken place in the luminous sky where the beauteous birds are soaring. Meteors fall down to represent the scene of shiny rain in dark sky. In the middle of my neighborhood, there is a giant rock that has been selected as podium for people's meeting; actually, we believe that this magical rock was fallen from tremendous space and that makes the neighborhood more paranormal. The general atmosphere has a tremendous impact in erasing the concerns and problems from your mind. How wonderful neighborhood that I used to live in !

1st Timed writing (fixed)

Saeed Alrayaisah
Nov 6, 2009
W400B


Behavior And TV Programs

Human behaviors are based on what they always practice in front of people’s eyes. Some of them get an impact from TV shows and movies, but how far does it affect to their behavior? Actually, I really believe that movies and programs on TV are one of the most common ways to change the behavior. One reason is that TV shows represent people’s habits and this makes people affected easily. People imitate the action that happen in movies or programs. For example, kids used to watch teaching-cartoon and we can observe that their behaviors are growing up. Another reasons some movies take us on the path of drugs, alcohol, fornication, disrespect, confrontation, modernism and many other evils that are apparent in our society today. Know that these evils are a direct result of watching and learning from the television. However, movies and TV shows have two-edged : negative and positive . And it depends on the person and his ability of controlling.