Opinion Paragraph ( Final draft )

Saeed Alrayaisah
Nov 4,2009
W400B


Women As Combatant

Women are not suitable for all jobs position specially in combat position, and I'm against women working as combatant . There are many facts and reasons that I based my opinion on. First, women are sensitive and soft creatures which is unacceptable in coarse job. They able to be hurt easily in combat. Also, They are not brave and solid enough to suffer combat position. Second, women will leave their own families if they joined to combat position. They have priority of taking care of thier family. They will leave their families for a long time which may occur the breakdown of family ties. Third, the society will look to them with contempt glance. People would say that women are losing their feminine traits .Finally, the community needs them more than the military. Women are suitable for teaching at school, nurses in hospitals, TV announcers and so on. Also, they can serve the military in another way; they can work in military as doctors to treat the wounded or as cooks to feed the veterans or even to be lecturers in the army .For that they are not appropriate for combat position.


waiting for your Criticism ..

My Golden Chance

Saeed Alrayaisah
Oct 23, 2009
W400B


My Golden Chance

I had many good actions in my life that happened to me, but there is only one thing that I selected it as the best thing that I did in my life : studying in U.S.
Many reasons gathered together in my selection. First of all, studying abroad make me able to connect with completely different cultures and to be familiar with their habits and customs. Second, I will obtain new languages from several ethnic people who I will meet them, and this release me from being restricted with one language and one connection . Finally, - which I considered it as the most important reason- I will have good opportunities of careers which may put me in high ranks and this what all we dream about . Therefore, the best thing that I did is my decision in studying abroad even of strict challenges that faced or will face me.

my classmate

Saeed Alrayaisah
Oct 22, 2009
W400B


My Classmate Enes

My classmate, Enes, is a very ambitious and struggler person. He attended language institute to improve his English skills in way which make him able to get master degree in management in soon future. He is ready to face the challenges and difficulties that may face him in his scholastic life. Besides the education, Enes fills his free time with several activities, actually, he is really a good soccer player. Also he loves listening to music and watching movies. He knows exactly how to manage his time, and therefore, I'm not wandering why he wants to continue his management study !