Opinion Paragraph ( Final draft )

Saeed Alrayaisah
Nov 4,2009
W400B


Women As Combatant

Women are not suitable for all jobs position specially in combat position, and I'm against women working as combatant . There are many facts and reasons that I based my opinion on. First, women are sensitive and soft creatures which is unacceptable in coarse job. They able to be hurt easily in combat. Also, They are not brave and solid enough to suffer combat position. Second, women will leave their own families if they joined to combat position. They have priority of taking care of thier family. They will leave their families for a long time which may occur the breakdown of family ties. Third, the society will look to them with contempt glance. People would say that women are losing their feminine traits .Finally, the community needs them more than the military. Women are suitable for teaching at school, nurses in hospitals, TV announcers and so on. Also, they can serve the military in another way; they can work in military as doctors to treat the wounded or as cooks to feed the veterans or even to be lecturers in the army .For that they are not appropriate for combat position.


waiting for your Criticism ..