Tuesday, November 17, 2009

descriptive paragraph ( final draft)

Saeed Alrayaisah
Nov 17, 2009
W400B



My Neighborhood


I grew up in a fantasy neighborhood. The capacious neighborhood shows how the colossal terrain entertains the kids when they play on it. The breeze spreads among residents just like a relaxing symphony, and that is a fertile thing to make you feel comfortable. The alley between the houses is such as an exciting maze where you can't get bored easily. The hills look like lands from haven surrounded by beautiful flowers and plants. Up there in the sky, romantic sunset has taken place in the luminous sky where the beauteous birds are soaring. Meteors fall down to represent the scene of shiny rain in dark sky. In the middle of my neighborhood, there is a giant rock that has been selected as podium for people's meeting; actually, we believe that this magical rock was fallen from tremendous space and that makes the neighborhood more paranormal. The general atmosphere has a tremendous impact in erasing the concerns and problems from your mind. How wonderful neighborhood that I used to live in !

2 comments:

  1. It is really beautiful place. Your paragraph is full of fantastic adjective. I can image I am in your neighborhood by these adjectives. I like it.

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  2. I'm so embarrassed abut confusing about 'neighbored' and 'neighborhood'!!

    I was so stupid!!! :(

    lol

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